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I'm a screenwriter and poet.Poetry Book
THE MOONLIGHT - POEM (Corrupted) by Justin Achneepineskum Why flow to me, oh crispy silver star? In tear and mazes, it glanced upon my whole. In a ha... Read more
DESTITUTIONSample from Pages: 11 - 15 Link to Full Screenplay: http://pc.celtx.com/project/01vb2CD0gT4b Link to Video Sample: ht... Read more
PLEAExcerpt from "The Coffee Girl" Screenplayby Justin Achneepineskum Plea.Plea with me.Plea to the sky.Plea to the sky so the water ma... Read more
THE WHIRLWINDExcerpt from "The Coffee Girl" scriptby Justin AchneepineskumSIDENOTES: The Two Little Sticks refers to two little bacter... Read more
BROKEN PULSESExcerpt from "The Coffee Girl" script By Justin AchneepineskumBeat me drums of life......struggling pulses pumping on.Free my c... Read more
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Heya,
I'm no expert myself lol. Only started writing poetry because of the Coffee Girl script. But I can give you a few pointers.
I don't know how many share my style of writing... but I don't try capturing thoughts down on paper. Instead, I try to capture motions and emotions. Music has a way of moving people.... so I try to capture the essence of a poem's rhythm.
Edward Allen Poe does this. Look up "The Raven".
Also... Study the poem meters. Shakespeare specialized in Iambic Pentameters where every second syllable is stressed. Example: "i HEAR thy WIND, thy WIND has CALLED for THEE. and SYMbols SHINE deSIGNS to SET me FREE."
Another pointer... study a bit of Linguistics: Phonetics (The sounding of words) and Semantics (the impact of a word's meaning). Sometimes too many T's make things sound choppy while many S words make things sound slippery. Just speak out your poems and feel its rhythm and you'll know what I mean. Feel out the rhythm, dude.