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HuyMoonOh (219 days ago)
You are a very insightful person and I really enjoy what you have to say regarding poetry and also in your poems there is a lot there half hidden half exposed
HuyMoonOh (216 days ago)
Yeah I do know what you mean, and to answer your question of my favorite poem I really don't have a favorite.  I tend to like other people's poetry more than mine.  I have always looked at myself as more of a student, learning from other people as I read more and more I grow more and more and I am able to write better, well at least I think so.  Sadly sometimes its not the case, I just write so my head doesnt' explode.  I'm not sure if you're familiar with Emily Dickinson's work, but you should definately check her out, she is hands down my favorite poet.
SweetTooth666 (216 days ago)
Yeah i like her, i like 'If I should die' and 'An altered look about the hills' but favorite poet has got to be Edgar Allen Poe, and my favorite is 'Annabel Lee' by him and 'Alone' and of course 'The Raven.' I also like Lord Byron.
HuyMoonOh (215 days ago)
Yeah for sure, I've actually been re-reading some of my favorite Poe stories.  His writing is absolutely top notch.  His poetry too is just impecable.
SweetTooth666 (210 days ago)
LDonals poems have very strange combinations of words but they're very good. a very unique style
HuyMoonOh (210 days ago)
I agree, it seems very beatnic.  Unusual for today's climate of poetry which seems to be more dominated by the slam style of poetry.  In response to your question regarding pain and poetry, I believe life is pain, death comes easy but living, truly living will always inspire pain, and pain inspires me.  At least for me pain is a motivational tool.  I believe it is also the case for you, at least that is what I get out of your poetry.  Unlike others though it seems we are sensitive and in tune with that pain which drives us.
Godsbookworm (209 days ago)
Hey!  Thanks for the add.  Thanks for the comment also.  Yes, I'm a self harmer.  I'm glad you like my screen name too.  I'll read some of your stuff and comment on it now.   
SweetTooth666 (209 days ago)
why thank you very much, nobody seems very socialable on here? Im friends with Huy Moon Oh and now you but no one else seems to talk much but i suppose thats the poets way!
HuyMoonOh (189 days ago)
Thanks for the comment, appreciate it.
jewelsofpassion (189 days ago)
Thank you for the comment.  Your poems are wonderful and remind me of what I have thought or felt now or in the past. 
SweetTooth666 (189 days ago)
why thank you very much
replaced (186 days ago)

wares 'her' gone???

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HuyMoonOh (183 days ago)
Thanks, yeah I don't really have a set style as of yet.  I experiement here and there but for the most part keep them simple.  I find a lot of tranquility among words when its concise.  I also just like using words your not use to hearing most of the time.  I really just enjoy learning langauge and playing with it.  I'm sure you're the same with regards to that last part.
replaced (180 days ago)
hey hun. got as poem on here now. u shud read it and tell me wot u think. chris wrote it 4 me, we is bac together now and our movin in wiv each other wen we av enough money for our own place woop woop. got a funny feelin i may be at da begining of settling down and i cant wait. mwah xxxKiss
sunflowerstar (179 days ago)
Thanks for your uplifting viewpoint, I appreciate it. At least I know someone reads my words. Your writing is awesome also and worth reading.
jewelsofpassion (78 days ago)
Hey!  I just added two new ones, if you would like to check them out.  It's been a while, but life hasn't been so kind until now.
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