Have you noticed that you never see anyone online? Your the first one ive seen on at the same time as me! Hows you? 

I saw your comment on someone elses poem saying you didn't like it or understand it. Good on you for being so honest! Not all criticism should be positive.

I know what you mean about loss and grief, I always live by a little motto along those lines 'swallow your horror and let it nourish you.' I cant remember where its from but i took it to mean to not run away from any pain or horror you can face but just to embrace it and numb yourself to it to become stronger. And i do take it as a compliment, thank you very much your very wise yourself. Do others ever ask you for advice or insight on things, you seem to the type who would?  How did you become friends with LDonald, if you dont mind me asking? 

most of the poetry i read is beat, i find myself writing without going back to revise, so i usually do write freeverse, sort of straight out of my consciousness making most of my peoms impulsive but the sentimental poem for the sentimental was an assigned poem for a creative writing class, it was suppose to be a shakespearean sonnet

yeah i know what your saying about "i knows" i did rush it, the funny language is beacuse i live in Devon but i wasnt born here. I was born in Liverpool but they speak with funny grammer here like they would say "i knows see" instead of i know. i may take you advice an try and touch up a few old ones and see what comes out. Theres no harm in trying 

you should try a site called www.tailcast.com its really good, you get much more feedback for poems. Ive been joined for 2 days and have 5 friends and about 30+ comments and all ive done is post about 10 poems and nothing else. Give it a go